
The long call of a train whistle from the far hill carries to our cabin welcoming the dawn, best alarm clock ever. The smell of bacon frying draws me out from under warm blankets a young teen throwing on the clothing of a new day
By mid-morning I’m on the move seventy degrees, slight breeze lunch packed, fly rod in hand striding forward into the mountain’s warm greeting
Now picking my way, scrambling ever downward into the canyon listening as I move, faintly hearing, now louder the alluring sound of running water trying to picture the stream soon to be seen
Parting the final branches, there a clear pool every stream-bottom rock in perfect focus and no footprints to be seen I delight in a feeling of discovery as I make ready to fish
Wading in icy, bone-chilling water line tangles and tree-caught flies alder branches blocking the way Such obstacles only feed my resolve
Under low limbs and leaves, walking on knees my world grown small rod tip poked through grabby branches searching out hidden trout
Saucy little ouzel rock-hopping and dipping pretending not to notice my presence that bird leading me upstream or perhaps a double-agent warning the fish?
Emerging from the cage of branches into an open sky my rod’s willowy feel the line smoothly unrolling overhead I’m mesmerized by the fly’s fluttery, bouncy riffle-dance
A sudden, splashy, surface eruption—a silvery blur a strong downward pull, then my fly air-mailed back to me What trick of that old fish had dislodged my hook? Some questions settle there beyond my answers
Soon climbing cascading falls rock over slippery rock spray drenching face and body but not touching my soul my exertion an embrace of this vibrant place
A view through boulders and small pines to a distant peak, a place to linger I grab my lunch and a stream-side seat How did that scene come into being, those rocks find this place? Speculation cut short, there’s still more water to see
In the stream, bent low hands cupped scooping up snow-melt nectar savoring the taste of a free-flowing moment youthful assurance that such moments will always be there
Now time to start back but much too soon drawn by what lies around that next bend the big-fish pool of my dreams? Got to see for myself I’ll be playing catch-up racing the clock home—again
Years later, by a fire no different than then reflecting on train tracks now overgrown dirt roads and creek water no longer to drink I warm myself in the memories, those wonderful, care-free days as a boy.
Dear Al, I love this boyhood memory poem. I think you should write more poems. Although as a kid I did not have much freedom to roam about I appreciate your memory of fishing with your dog by a clear stream. I can’t believe you are 86, glad you are still going strong.
I miss our silent retreat days at San Damiano. God bless you.
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Hi Fran, There is something satisfying about recalling some of my most vivid memories from early days on a stream and tying them together in one poem. My initial impression is that poetry is even more difficult than other writing I have done. It will be interesting to see if I get inspired to do another one. Meanwhile I miss those retreats too–James Finley, Father Eddie, and Father Dan all were excellent in their own ways and enriched my spiritual perspective. It was fun to get to know you and several other regulars. Thanks for the encouragement.
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Your essays are the best and now the added attraction of poetry, is wonderful.
Yes, those are the main presenters that I also miss. Hope they schedule a 5 day silent very soon.
We met many wonderful people there.
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Another delightful blog! You are a truly gifted writer with the ability to convey in such a way that readers can immerse themselves in the narrative. I so enjoy your “takeaways”. Thank you! ❤️🤗
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Thanks Kathy for the encouragement. At age 86, I was suddenly inspired to write a poem. I don’t know if I will ever want to again, but was fortunate that son John helped me avoid a few rookie errors. He had a great teacher/poet at St. Mary’s.
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